Sad Boy Story

Walt: add detail to our writing by using descriptive language. Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution Instructions:   Have at least two characters who speak Show your reader how your character's are feeling without telling them i.e. do not use feeling words (sad, happy, excited, scared, upset, tired) allowed. “But mum, I really want the game and I have enough money”. “Fine, but be quick”. Tom walked down to the store with 40 dollars in his pocket. He walked into the store. “Hi, can I please get star destroyer 3?”. “Sorry mate, we’re sold out. Tom walked back to his house. “Muuuuuuuum, the game got sold out”. “All I ever wanted was that game”. He cried for 3 hours until his dad walked into the room holding it in his hand. “YAAAAAAAAY”! “How did you get it”? “It came out yesterday out ‘Videos R Us’. He played the game for the whole weekend until he got bored of it.